Sunday, 12 September 2010

The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe

As a child, I would read a book and become consumed by the story. I read as I walked to school and have been known to bump into lamp posts and post boxes and apologise to them. I would take on the tragedy or the joy of the characters. One week, I would slay witches and devils with a silver dagger in my hand and the next, I would be a famous ballerina pirouetting along the pavement. When asked what I would like to be when I grew up, the answer was never a secretary or a teacher. I wanted to be an explorer or a private detective, an artist (obviously starving in a garret in Montmartre) or a spy. With a book in my hand, I could be anyone or go anywhere I pleased. Like the children in The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe, I could enter a fabulous new world by climbing into a fusty old wardrobe.

Lily went down the stairs to her parent's bedroom. The curtains printed with bright copper leaves fluttered in the open window. She ran her hands down the fabric of her mother's dresses hanging in the walnut wardrobe. She could smell 'Midnight in Paris', the perfume that Mother wore. She climbed into her secret hiding place among the floral dresses - a perfumed midnight garden.

So do we still read books as we did as children?
Can we still open our minds and let the words rush in?
More importantly, how do we write a book? Is it
alchemy? Can we turn words into heart grabbing stories; base metals into gold? How much is art and how much is science? Does the rhythm of the words come from some secret place within? Should we unchain our thoughts and set the words free upon the page or tie our minds in knots with grammar and precision, word counts, deadlines and writers block? Undoubtedly good writing is a marriage of art and science, but like a good marriage it requires warmth and subtlety, shades of darkness and light, humour and imagination, seduction and spice.

That's easily said but not so easily done. Sometimes it helps to take inspiration from other writers. I have been looking at at the opening lines of novels because I imagine that publishers will not read any further if the first line doesn't grab them. Among my favourites are Joanne Harris: IT IS A RELATIVELY LITTLE-KNOWN FACT THAT, OVER THE COURSE OF a single year, about twenty million letters are delivered to the dead (The Lollipop Shoes); and irresistibly, Peter Mayle: The year began with lunch (A Year in Provence).
I am lucky to have the help and support of the Seven Valley Authors. They are honest in their criticism and praise and have a wealth of experience between them. So read and learn, listen and be guided and importantly be authentic, these will be my mantras.

Wednesday, 30 June 2010

A Head Full of Budgerigars

I woke up this morning with the intention of going for a run - another paving stone on the road to hell. Instead I decided to start this blog.

One morning sitting at my computer and trying not to be constantly distracted by the fabulous view from my window, I stopped sending emails and started writing about my home on Clee Hill. I wanted to put into words how I felt about such a wild and beautiful place and the emotional ties I felt with Shropshire and Ludlow in particular. I had no intention of writing a book or getting involved with writing groups and competitions, but somehow one page led to another and here I find myself half-way through my book A Head Full of Budgerigars.


The cottage on the hill was just a few miles from Lily's former home in Chumley, a small market town thirty miles from nowhere. At every narrow road and lane, the beautiful Shrubshire countryside was visible: the sweeping emerald and gold hills beyond the church, the allotments in the hollow, the embroidery of fields glimpsed between the houses and the dark fairytale forests in the distance. The town boasted a ruined castle, crumbling city walls and towering Horse Chesnuts that scattered conkers on the cobbled streets. This was where her children had made rope swings across the river Tunny and walked the treacherous weir, caught bright copper slow worms on the sunny banks and found knobbly toads like big fat spuds among the fallen rocks.


Writing a book is rather like trying to hold a writhing fish on the end of a thin line at the tip of a very long pole. That is to say, control is hard to maintain and every now and then it gets away from you. Then of course there is the problem of what to do with it if you finally reel it in.


Until I started writing about my home, I hadn't realised the significance of that word to me. I began to reflect on the many places I had lived, on my family and childhood, on relationships and marriage, on good times and bad. I have tried to weave a fairy story with heroes and villains, humour and sadness, because that is the story of all our lives.